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All Comments on 'Twin Odysseus'

by JamesChristian

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
That's quite a feat

I've never had a story lose me at the first word.

When will writers learn that introducing the second person is NEVER a good idea?

JamesChristianJamesChristianalmost 11 years agoAuthor
You

Seemed like a good idea to me!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

That was a beautiful story. Almost a loving poem.

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