by Seductivebeast
It was a hot story and got me very excited but I could have done without the bit where she essentially admitted to masturbating with the shower head and that it was somehow okay by her strict moral code. I don't buy that the kind of person we're told Rose was, wouldn't think that wasn't sinful.
Yeah it's nitpicking and yeah, I admitted before that your story got me very excited regardless of that tiny issue but that revelation momentarily took me out of the good story you'd been building.