All Comments on 'Twink or Dare'

Wow, I'm into this story! My favorite part is when his friend showed up very feminine and beautiful and he realized he was getting turned on by "her." From a writer's POV, I think you can tighten this up. Limit the repetitive use of words like "grabbing" and maybe spend some describing what's it's like to touch each. I'd like to see an emotional and erotic buildup. But overall, super hot and a great concept!

That was so hot!!!!

The characters were just too stupid.

Great story. I was hard as they left to trick & treat

Thanks for the feedback. Glad you enjoyed it !

That was so hot and the ending was so sweet! I loved it, thanks for the story!!!

I enjoyed sucking off my best friend when I dressed up in his mom's stockings and heels. Lost my cherry at a young age.

Part 2

The next day

Finally I found one of those gems, the story was short, hot, sweet and with a good finale.

What can I say? I love vanilla shit and when two friends get together it's hotter, it's reminds me when I was a teen with my childhood friend, some day I will write about all the shit we did and let me tell you, it was hot AF! Sadly and thankful he isn't in my strike zone anymore, bc I only like girly boys and woman.

Wow that was funny and hot