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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Awesome!

Can't wait for the next one

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Leaving Sasha in a spread position

Well, I am a bit confused. The cell Sasha kind of described was 1 meter by 1 meter but I guess there was a lot of room above as he was pulled by one leg up until he was almost doing a complete leg split. And his wrists were cuffed to that right leg that was pulled up. And his head was kind of stuck sucking on a dildo. That had to be uncomfortable to say the least as most men would not be able to do a full leg split without some previous stretching. He had some kind of suit on as well? When this chapter ended he was hanging almost upside down with really full intestines (almost 1.5 gallons of something). I would hope that the folks running the show would recognize that the MCIS had reset and almost caused a whole lot of pain. Love the concept and I hope the future chapters are just as emotionally draining as Sasha is experiencing. There are a lot of other male Lit characters that should be shown the experiences here. Would love to see illustrations too.

AnonymousAnonymous4 days ago

sad ending

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