All Comments on 'Twinkle'

I love it. Absolutley perfect in every way

"That motherfucker" is EXACTLY what I was thinking, LOL!

Sacred Beauty, you certainly took us in an unexpected direction.

Thank you!

5 stars.

So hot! One of the best stories I've read on LitE! I wish I had my loved one here

No payment for services rendered + emotional attachments = a man about to be hunted down and taught a number of lessons about payments, love, and stimulating through the climax.

Surprise ending, good job. Well, if he was making love, then he didn't hire her as a call girl. I can see his logic, haha.

Again, well done SB. Nice emotional range, sensuality level very high, you continue to raise the bar. You write like you've actually had sex! That's a quality that seems grow increasingly rare on this website. You have created high expectations from your fans, myself included.

Totally erotic and yet so very romantic! You will truly love it!

that kind of says it all. Well written. bravo!

i thought it was wonderful, i look forward to reading more of your work.