All Comments on 'Twins?'

I though this was a pretty good story, can't wait to see what the morning brings, in keeping with the title of your story I am guessing either one or both will have twins

And this was nothing like good lesbian erotica. I love your idea, you just need practice. I won't be like some of those hateful commentors who tell authors never to write again. I think you will be fine; you just need lots of practice. So keep trying.