by WilliamBabcock
the slow build and the tease is great. i wish the chapters could be a little longer and the sex scenes a little more developed - but thats probably because i enjoy reading this so much and i'm disappointed when the chapter ends! its very erotic. great stuff. 5 stars again. please keep them coming!!
i'm surprised you haven't gotten any hate comments about the bisex. thats good. i hope it continues!
An explosion 'conclusion' is.on its way, hopefully fuelled by the slow burn! .
way too early to end it!!! i love this story!! how about working on the boys and mom when they get home?
Thanks for your comments goducks1 and DAPSlittlelady50 (Lindsay gets luckier in next chapter!). In Chapter 4 Lindsay and the boys come... to a sort of conclusion. I hope you enjoy it. Lindsay and the boys did, as did I! Perhaps then we will see the follow up series "Twins at Home"!