All Comments on 'Twins Abroad with Mother Ch. 03'

by WilliamBabcock

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goducks1goducks1over 5 years ago
loved chapter 3

the slow build and the tease is great. i wish the chapters could be a little longer and the sex scenes a little more developed - but thats probably because i enjoy reading this so much and i'm disappointed when the chapter ends! its very erotic. great stuff. 5 stars again. please keep them coming!!

i'm surprised you haven't gotten any hate comments about the bisex. thats good. i hope it continues!

WilliamBabcockWilliamBabcockover 5 years agoAuthor
Thanks goducks 1

An explosion 'conclusion' is.on its way, hopefully fuelled by the slow burn! .

goducks1goducks1over 5 years ago
a conclusion??!!

way too early to end it!!! i love this story!! how about working on the boys and mom when they get home?

DAPSlittlelady50DAPSlittlelady50over 5 years ago
I love this story

Absolutely wonderful, what a lucky woman!

WilliamBabcockWilliamBabcockover 5 years agoAuthor
After chapter 4

OK! We'll follow them home, for sure!

WilliamBabcockWilliamBabcockover 5 years agoAuthor
Chapter 4 and beyond

Thanks for your comments goducks1 and DAPSlittlelady50 (Lindsay gets luckier in next chapter!). In Chapter 4 Lindsay and the boys come... to a sort of conclusion. I hope you enjoy it. Lindsay and the boys did, as did I! Perhaps then we will see the follow up series "Twins at Home"!

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