All Comments on 'Twins Getting Ready'

Bravo 👏👏

Keep it going!

Absolute best story ever!!! keep them comin!

2,828 Followers and counting after your 8th publication. That says it all Major

It is an excellent story the only thing with it is a sex slave would finally surrender her back door to her master.

Please tell me there is a pt. 2 to this of just them 2 nothing special just their day to day lives (work, school, job).

Amazing writing, I do hope that there will be a sequel

I didn't like this story it would have been better if it was only about the brother and sister and no other men were involved. I also did not like the that the sister was used as a conquest by the professor and his friends or as a slave

Pretty good but the corny dialogue and the shit with the professor were more distractions than adding content. I'm glad you had him burn the professor but letting his mom spend even a minute with Wright was confusing. I'm assuming (father never mentioned) he was the man of the house, so why not more protective? 4* overall.

@anonymous

So sucking fucking hot:

Bro you are one lucky man

but what happened with mom and the professor?

That was an awesome story loved it. Want to read more about them. 10stars

This was an amazing and sensuous story!!!! I like your writing style a lot. I really appreciated that the Professor(s) and Beth weren't pulled into a threesome. Or a lesbian relationship with Hannah and Beth didn't happen. I always quit reading a brother/sister incest story when another person becomes involved in the relationship. I didn't quite like the ending. I want to know what happens next? Did they stay together or move on after college?

This is a VERY well-written story! Plus, I got so hot that I almost had an orgasm without touching myself.

Such a cute story :)

I enjoyed this. Mind, I have come to expect that in your stories. Well done, dude.

- BH

Enjoyed the story, very well written and liked the playful dialogue. Unlike some of the comments, I'm perfectly happy to suspend reality and enjoy a fantasy where the women have big tits and the men big cocks. Same haters must really not like the superhero flicks.

I love that you're writing new stories!! Five stars and a favorite point!

Fantastic story! Well done mate.

Well, I didn't like the submissive stuff (collar etc. ), so I just ignored it, but I did like the story overall.

Very erotic story (you need an editor). I guess the ending was appropriately done. Four stars.i

I love this story, as written; it was long, but it was worth it! It honestly could have been three different chapters and it still would have been just as good!

It is a shame that anonymous commenters feel the need to berate others' writing to try to bring them down in the rating points and benefit their own stories' scores by griping because a character in a sexually-themed story is "too slutty"? Who's the 14-yr-old? If you don't like this kind of story, write your own and quit hiding behind the "anonymous" tag so we can all read YOUR trash! 5/5

I usually dont leave negative comments but the language really spoiled this fantasy for me. Felt juvenile and corny. The protagonist doesnt have any redeeming qualities. Im surprised other commentators thought the story was realistic, I didnt think any aspect of it was

Great story! I hope for a next part at some point.

ignore the haters

Got to give it 5 though the last two pages didn't really work for me. Otherwise really excellent.

I really struggled with voting on this. Part of me really wanted to give you a five. There's a lot of good things in this story that really pushed my buttons.

Unfortunately, the leash and collar garbage combined with the bondage undermined all of the good feelings that I had. Not everyone finds that kind of stuff pleasant, so a BDSM trigger warning in the beginning would have been nice.

There were also a few mistakes along the way, but I've seen far worse before. But just in case you get into a bug swatting mood, this line should read HANNAH, not Beth:

>> Beth stood and said, "Thanks for the show, Brian, but I need to get a move on or I won't be ready when

>> Ted arrives."

Re-submitting edits to fix stuff like that is a piece of cake. 3/5

Didn't like it. Like twin stories and whatever magic your other stories has this one lacks it. Also they both were unlikable.

Excellent. Best story I've read in a very long time! Thank you.

Great story. It kept me interested throughout. I only found a couple of small problems with the grammar. They weren't wrong, but they were european words that would never be used in Tennessee. Nobody calls their ass a bum in the US and we do not use the term ensuite as all bathrooms have a shower. Ensuite is a term used in Europe to designate that a bath has a shower and it isn't shared by others in the hotel. Here if a bathroom doesn't have a bath/shower it is referred to as a half bath. Other than those two minor things, it was a great well written story

Dear anonymous: “ensuite bathroom” is a term that’s used all the time in US real estate. It’s a bathroom that’s attached to a bedroom.

I really liked this! The relationship dynamics with the professor and their respective partners were done really well (even if I think there are more interesting things you could do with Ted than "he's a dweeb". But the back and forth contrast of their budding relationship and that which they have with others was really interesting, and the slow building of making out was extremely hot. (My favourite scene was when they made out fully clothed, all relaxation and love, but I'm a bit weird like that)

I /do/ think it kinda ran out of steam towards the end there. After they fucked for the first time the remaining submission/public kinks didn't really take much advantage of the premise and became a little generic.

Still, that I stuck through to the end is praise of your character building, normally I don't stick around this long. Thanks!

5 stars +++. Good writing. Story flowed pretty well. The best were between the twins.

Really like the interactions with the twins. The story was simple and creative with lots of sexy scenes. Thanks for this.

On page one she decided to play around with a married guy. That ends it for me and gets you one star, if there was negative stars you would get five.

I gave you five stars because anonymous is a dick and didn't rate you on your writing. Don't be a judgy bitch! Just go read something else! There are about a million stories on here.

In my opinion, this is one of the best stories on the site.

Your writing skills and dialogue is actually quite good!

Good story and would like to see where it goes from where it ended. 5 stars.

Good story, would love to read more about these two! I like the build-up and how he slowly steals away his sister from the douchebag professor and then her own boyfriend. Can't all girls in all stories be demure virgins, sometimes the chase and conquest is the best part!

5* from me

Not the usual I/T stuff, this one led us along gently and we always felt they secretly wanted one another. Nicely done MajorRewrite.

Marvellous writing and a great story.

Keep writing!

Loved it

I wish I could give this 4.5 stars, but I gave it 5.

There is a list of things that I personally didn't like, but they did not overshadow my general appreciation enough to give only 4.

I'm kind of a stickler for loyalty, so all the cheating bothered me a little. It hindered my liking the characters more.

There were certain things about it that seemed somewhat unrealistically exaggerated, namely cumming 4 feet into the air, but maybe it can be done. I don't know.

There were no parts I felt like skimming over, which says a lot for a story of more than 4 pages.

I would like to see a sequel, but it is not a story that effectively demands one.

The mutual love, care and affection shown are almost as engaging as the sex. A very well thought out and written story. I definitely look forward to reading more of your work, sadly there's only one more listed here on Literotica. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memories?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

Perfect!!

Wonderful story of the affection between very close Twins. Every year hundreds of twins get together in Twinsburg Ohio. I've often wondered how many sets have had sex together. I'm hoping they break their love story to Mom, and Brian breeds his beautiful sister. Five stars, and thank you for it.

I am so confused, she clicked so immediately and completely with Ted that she had no issue whatsoever cheating on him with her professor, how does that make sense when she said she was possibly thinking of him maybe being the one for her?

That said, omg the sex was hot af! Him dressing her was admittedly one of my favorite parts as well. The domesticity of it hit hard. And this had to be seriously the most loving Dom/Sub story I have ever read. It was exceedingly soft and lovely. And seriously sexy. And you could feel the love they had for eachother at literally every single junction of the story.

One of the best stories ever written here. I wish I could give it 7 stars. Excellent excellent build up, love and writing. Like others have said, we all want to see our girl as innocently only having eyes for us, so the sleeping around is a bit off putting. However, being around hot girls with tons of options, this is very realistic, and the little details like wearing a condom with everybody except her brother illustrate the loyalty in her heart. I would personally like to see the guy a bit more cocky, instead of saying “no you’re gorgeous” he could be like “lucky you”. I found the excessive complimenting of her a little beneath him since he was indeed better than every other guy in her life. Her submission is evidence of her admiration of him and I think he could be a tad more domineering and step into that archetype more fully. Those two complaints are really my only critiques, and the story really completely outshines all of that. Absolute masterpiece, should be entered in whatever contests there are. This story really deserves more shine!

I've read a lot of brother/sister stories by a number of what I consider good suthors, but this is at the top of my list. I will be rereading it a number of times.

Wonderful...

One of the best...

Thank You

Absolutely outstanding. Great storyline, excellent writing and detail, super hot sex. Just a fantastic and fun story!!!!! Thank you!!!!!

a well written, engaging story.

I look forward to reading ,ore of your material.

Thank you