All Comments on 'Twins of Trallis: Sandstorm'
by xelliebabex
- 4 Comments
shyintxover 10 years agoDid not like how this started off... by killing Dana. You could have given a little more to Dana's story.
aisielynnover 10 years agoVery good continuation of the first story. i look forward to reading more and seeing just what a sandstorm dancer can do. Keep writing!
Rumabout 6 years agoJeezis, How could I have missed that there was a ..."prequel"? Now I have to go back and read THAT!! Good story so far. I'll give it a 4 stars because some of the typos affected the story flow. Some made me stop and reread to make sure of what you were going on about.
That said, congrats on the cancer thing. 23 years C-free, here. I know what you went through and it wasn't easy riding that roller coaster. For me, it was as bad after all was said and done, in some ways. Now go and live the life that YOU want!! You have the right because of where you went! <3
FranziskaSissy4 months agoAll in all a fantastic story, the Stormdancers are an exceptional creation and you portray them as lovely, big-hearted girls which makes them even more unique …… great chapter
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