All Comments on 'Twins Share Everything'

Hard to read with unnecessary writing.

Perhaps a bit too much commentary interrupting the flow of the story. Other than that a good effort. Four stars

Did you mix up Casey with Amira. Witch one is male witch one is female? Please introduce the other characters. Proof read and edit. Story is confusing.

Very nice and capturing the magic of a first night. But far too outdated and sexistic in terms of "active boy and passive girl". Where is Amira's orgasm? I think Casey (or Cassandra!) should have delivered it orally first ^^

Thanks for a fun ride!

Wit finished higher than lust, but it was worth it!

Unique writing style.

Thanks!