All Comments on 'Twisted European Tryst'

Please get an editor. This story would be great if it was easier to follow along. I had to stop reading it about 1/4 way down because of the wrong word use.

Forget the editor and keep writing.

Enjoyed the slow build up. Keep the story going. Maybe her and mom will play around???

Hi and thanks for the wonderful read. I loved how the story built slowly, teasing the reader as Kara was teased by her mother. I would have liked to have had a more detailed description of both mother and daughter to better fill out the images in my mind, but this is minor.

Again, over all a very very nice story.