All Comments on 'Twisted Little Sister'

Well written, but as you said in the title, twisted. It's real simple, tell the bitch sister to go to hell, let the boys know what's going on and let the chips fall where they may. She own's her older sister now. Too bad. Again shoot the little sister.

superb well written

As another reader has noted, I got the impression several times during this tale that sororicide might be imminent. But you've told what is essentially the same story several times; I think this is the least memorable of those.

Your stories have such great humiliating twist...I love them all!

The way the story played out was just plain barbaric and disgusting.Clearly Dawn being the Evil Sister from Hell truly hated Trish and felt such loathing for her older sister that Dawn wanted to ruin and humiliate completely,but in doing that Dawn showed how fucking jealous she was.

Dawn realized she would never be as smart or pretty as Trish,so she cooked up this plan to ultimately humiliate and destroy Trish,but like the old saying goes "kharma is a bitch" and Dawn will eventually get hers because nobody escapes Gods Rules.