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by JuanSeiszFitzHall

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RoperTraceRoperTraceover 2 years ago

Excellent! Great pace and build-up. Not my normal fare, but I'm branching out. Looking forward to the next chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This story falls victim to unlikeable characters. There's nothing erotic about people you can't root for.

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'Juan Seisz FitzHall' is (big surprise) a pseudonym, under which I have published three erotic novels at smashwords.com: 'Mega Platinum VIP,' 'The Dance Game,' and 'Erotopia,' which together make up the trilogy 'The Erotichronicles.' That trilogy is finished. If the characters...

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