All Comments on 'Two Birds with One Stone'

Wow, this one is a shocker. I don't know what to say about it. It's not a sexy three jerk off story that some are looking for but it certainly is a tragic one. When you deal with diverse cultures you don't always get what you expect. Thank so much for taking the time to read it. My best to all of you. Your comments and emails as always are appreciated.

Main character, dialogue, cultures, and storytelling sounded ‘real’. Good job! Huge twist at the end, but didn’t seem like writer was searching for a way to end the story and this was the best he could come up with. It “fit”.

for your kind comments.

You are dead right about finding she is the ugly one in the morning.

At least mine quoted poetry when I was sober.