All Comments on 'Two Families'

Sorry, but this is so disjointed I just can't follow it. 😥

Very very erotic!!! 5 Big Stars

Just fantastic. Thank you

Wow! So much fun I cannot stop reading. True family love.

Good story. You say Earl and Jessie are best friends. As are Ella and Molly. But later it turns out they are really also cousins.

Yes it is a bit disjointed but the sex is so hot that I'm willing to look past it. Could use a good proofreading by third party and it would be top shelf.

Totally impossible, totally and impossibly fun to read. One complaint, you could have made 10 stories out of this one. :-(

Fun story. My one instance of being thrown out of the story was when they were driving and the boys went down on each other and no one commented on it.

I’m so turned on by this story, I’m wanking like never before. I’m about to explode!

you obviously got bored typing this story by the way you rushed the details of the two families all hooking up, i know the problem, i once wrote a story about myself & a doctor who moved in next door who happened to be a bery passable crossdresser. all factual, i got to 18 chapters & about 45,000 words but got bored writing it so never completed it. i'd posted it on my xhamster profile & lost the lot when they stopped allowing members to post stories on the site. that was three laptops ago so it & several other lengthy biographical stories were lost, i could re-write them from memory because they actually happened between 1974 & 2020 when the covid pandemic began & i no longer have the patience to write these days.

good story but try spellchecking, grammar corrections & making sure you don't keep changing from a first to third person narrative as you've told the story from several different aspects which can be confusing to follow. oh & try not to repeat stock phrases too much when explaining the in's & out's of the sex scenes 8/10

Honestly, not very good. Very rushed pacing and just felt bland overall.

Great story, but loved the other version better.

So 'nude' is different than 'naked'

I guess I learned something new.

Although I believe most guys would just love being able to fuck anybody they chose in reality it'd never happen.

And, the silly story went on & on & on until it got really boring.

I was generous voting 2 stars.

Could have been a big better put together without all the rushed sex. Having one couple at a time ( be it bog boy or boy girl girl or girl boy) fucking while the others watch and listen instead of one big fuck fest everytime would make for a great series. Still I got wet and my husband and I fucked hard. I have a 26 ye old daughter Id love to eat out and her dad fu k her, but we dream hopefully one day

please tell me there's more

That's incest squared. great combinations and lustful appetites. A LITTLE resistance might add to it but the voyeuris and enthusiasm of everyone is winning. thanks

Incredible! One of the hottest stories ever. Too bad it is so short