All Comments on 'Two for One'

Good story. Started off slow but picked up nicely. The ending was very rushed tho. Her dilemma was nicely detailed. Leaving the asshole and ending up where there are 2 guys she's got the hots for and vice versa. I see 3 domes coming up in the next chapter. Good start

2 stars

DragonRider55

Like the entire premise... Feel sorry for the odd man out to be...

It’s a BOGO situation. Nicely written.

Great story! Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Of course she can have both Fred and his son.

so much potential for more of the story. The way you have written it screams "more, please".

Not only a first but any submission. You have great potential.

Enjoyed it and am looking for more

I thoroughly enjoyed and can't wait for the next chapter

I'm eager for the next chapter.

Very good start. Liked the characters and the pace. Keep writing and thanks for your time and imagination.