by dinstigator
I just read the first four (I hope there are more coming soon) chapters. The sex scenes are really hot, and you write well, but the chapters are too short. I usually read the stories in "Novels and Novellas" because they are mostly good stories with a lot of sex thrown in. This was some hot sex with no back story.
If those 2 girls have too much pussy, I'll take care of some!
Lukas