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All Comments on 'Two Heads Are Better...'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

The sentence structure makes this extremely difficult to read.

PennLadyPennLadyabout 13 years ago
I agree

Lack of punctuation, lack of complete sentences -- I got as far as the (first?) phone call for a new roommate and quit.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

Sentence structure was a little rough and hard to read, but it was still a damn good story.

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