by qwertyuiopp
...Sorry to be such a drag but there is complete lack of realism. The author is copying all the other mediocre, BDSM porn. They need to get some experience at life and writing vanilla sex before trying a level of complex storytelling as this genre.
I do not know if the author is male or female. Whichever, probably pretty young. Obviously lacking in knowledge of female physiology or psychology.
Yeah, a lot young women are also ignorant, that's what makes them such easy victims of experienced males.