All Comments on 'Two Hundred Dollars Ch. 27'

I am already getting sad that it is drawing to a conclusion. It is very impressive how you were able to keep to the story line of paying back the money for this many chapters. Thanks.

Better than last chapter, and it should go without saying that it is good. The only reason I give any critique is because I think this could be perfect with tweaking.... I absolutely loved most of it, but I just felt like the ladies must have had some communication about things at some point... if not direct then cryptic texts lol... I could be wrong, but I suspect it... maybe cryptic messages read wrong led to the lie? Ignore me, I am an angst shipper lol

Laura just thought it wasn't important.

She thought of it as a minor part of the little game between Bailey and Kent, something they use to hide their feeling for each other. She didn't understand that it mattered to Bailey (who follows rules) and Kent (who cares about consent).

the final chapters! I'm all caught up on this fantastic series, and with such a low amount of debt remaining, I feel like there's a lot of emotional ground still left to cover for these three characters. Time for them to start getting honest about their feelings for each other.

Xtorch you have done such a great job. This is by far one of my favorite stories and I will be sad when it's over. They need a star rating for the whole series!!!!!

Glad you're enjoying the story so much, because I'm enjoying writing it.

The next chapter is halfway through Bae's editing, so it shouldn't be much longer.

Cheers,

@XavierTorch

I really love this story, exploring their sexuality in a safe way. I was hoping that Kent and Bailey end up as a couple. Or they could be a thruple?

It’s really well done, plenty of attention to detail it’s a very realistic story. Poor Laura does have guilt issues, thank you so much organised religion!

Tess (UK)