All Comments on 'Two Ladies Sharing Their Secrets'

by zorro4l

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

"Somehow, they knew not to drive."

Somehow, I find that amusing. So amusing I gave it one star.

The first woman is wearing a "one-piece dress". I'm trying to think if I've ever seen a two-piece dress. That was pretty cute, I must hand it to you. Perhaps I should rip it in half and give you two pieces.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Your poor grasp of English grammar, especially punctuation and capitalization, is so distracting that I couldn't stand to finish the story. I was wondering about that, and then the fact that when money came into it you referred to "kroner" made it clear that English is not your native language.

Sorry, but 1*.

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