by zorro4l
"Somehow, they knew not to drive."
Somehow, I find that amusing. So amusing I gave it one star.
The first woman is wearing a "one-piece dress". I'm trying to think if I've ever seen a two-piece dress. That was pretty cute, I must hand it to you. Perhaps I should rip it in half and give you two pieces.
Your poor grasp of English grammar, especially punctuation and capitalization, is so distracting that I couldn't stand to finish the story. I was wondering about that, and then the fact that when money came into it you referred to "kroner" made it clear that English is not your native language.
Sorry, but 1*.