All Comments on 'Two Masters: Dressed for Adventure'

If you can't even be bothered to learn how to write dialogue properly, nobody who is even slightly educated will want to read your stories. Why not spend the time learning how to do it properly? At this moment in time your writing is an absolute mess and not remotely clear.

This is a stylistic experiment. The original draft used italics and bold to denote the speaker in dialogue. I may come back later and update to match that formatting, but it takes longer to publish than straight text and I wanted to make the contest deadline. Thank you for your input on this reading experience.

I found that so funny and weird which is perfect for me.