All Comments on 'Two MILF’s for Valentine’s Day'

Wow, i remmember a night like this one. Though not as successful as Lou's.

Great story, i hope you write some more!

When it started ranting and called her a bitch it killed the mood.

Having one MILF for Valentine's Day would have made Lou fortunate, but two are off-scale high. He should have bought a lottery ticket, too. Now it appears, his luck will continue.

Speaking of luck, good luck in the contest.

TOO MUCH WRONG FOR ME TO LIST.

Considering that you're just starting out as a writer of erotica, and that you were writing this against a contest deadline, and that you didn't have a chance to have anybody edit it, this has to be rated as a distinguished work!

Anybody can nitpick an author's work, but let your critics sit down to that frighteningly blank, white monitor screen and see how well they can spin a tale.

I sincerely hope that you will continue to submit your stories to this website so we can all enjoy them. Let's make a deal: you keep writing your stories and I'll keep reading them and throwing stars at them.

Please continue the story

Very well written and hotter than the depths of hell! I hope there’s a sequel coming,

I had a friend, luvved mature divorced milf types, said "...they don't tell, don't swell, grateful as hell...and they give gold..."

n.b. he was a real cocksmith, former Chippendale-type dancer

A nice piece of writing.

Bravo! 5 stars!