All Comments on 'Two of a Kind Ch. 06'

After the sadness of the last chapter I liked how you put this one together and can't wait for more!!

but sad too,the snake guy is interesting. Great story

Dangerous snake badass? Possibly deliberate plague outbreaks? Digging up dead jungle cats? Involving Velaku and Natham? I am most definately intrigued. Can't wait for the next installment for some answers! Awesome as always....

xoxo

NightTempest

Damn there is a whole lot happening, lol, and you got it all under control! Okay, really want to know about the snake badass, he grabbed my attention right off the bat. I swear, this just keeps getting better and better.

want to know more about the snake he sound sexy

Awesome! Happy to see the clans helping each other out, and I want to know more about the snake. Know we'll get to the bottom of the dilemma sooner or later. Don't want the story to end.

Loved the crossover. Would like to know more about Davis.

These stories are all part of a larger tale being told. I am trying to make sure that each story has a natural conclusion for the pair being told as I don't want to write any seques. Today I posted Chapter 7. It should be out soon. Thank you to everyone who has enjoyed this chapter and story so far; thank you for commenting!

Delicious

Now they've bonked (what again? Yes, two hoisted ollocks per chapter) let's get on with the plot

Let's see ! Bashta said that his Father told his Mother and Him that he had a vision that Bashta would continue their Tribe's line and continue to protect the Temple. To continue Bashta's bloodline and gene's. I bet the JAGUAR GOD not only Blessed their Mating Ceremony, but also enabled Bashta to get Pregnant to have their Kitlings. To not only continue Bashta's Bloodline, but also to give Calvin an Heir for his Pride too. And I bet they find out when they go back to the Jungle and the Temple next year. It sounds like something the JAGUAR GOD would do as he seemed a little mischievious to me. Plus the JAGUAR GOD himself said that Bashta's Line would continue to be the Care Takers of the Temple and that Calvin's Line would be the Protectors. I hope Bashta likes being pregnant when it is the right time for him to be. The JAGUAR GOD will tell them when the right time will be I'm sure. There probably is a ceremony involved in some way to sanctify the Conception, but I'm sure the birth would need to be in the Temple for The JAGUAR GOD to be present or a Temple could be built on Pride Lands and someting Sacred could be brought from the Mother Temple to give the JAGUAR GOD a conduit to the new Temple dedicated to Him. So Bashta won't have to travel during his last tri-mester of pregnacy. Special Cleansing in a Pool that was built for the Temple for Purification, and the Flowers brought or grown from seeds from the Jungle in a Hot House for Ceremony's, and Oils would be prepared for the Birth. With an Avatar of the JAGUAR GOD present. ~~~~~~~And I bet the FALCON GOD and LYNX GOD get in on the action, and not to be out done by the JAGUAR GOD, Velaku and Natham find that Natham gets pregnant too. As Natham is more solid than Velaku and Velaku needs to be strong in his Head Alpha Leader Status of all the Tribes. And Natham being a Feline Carthara and Felines having Litters. Can we say Triplets maybe. Hmm !

AND BELIEVE THAT YOU WILL GIVE US THE CLOSURE WE ALL CRAVE FOR THIS AMAZING STORY ...

AS MUCH AS I LOVED THE TOTAL HAPPINESS BETWEEN THE RECENTLY MATED COUPLE AT THE END, I FEEL THERE ARE STILL A WHOLE NUMBER OF ISSUES THAT NEED EXPLAINING !!

AS IS NOW USUAL WITH YOUR WORK, I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THE STORY AND COULDN'T GET ENOUGH ! PLEASE GIVE ME WHAT I WANT: THE EXPLANATION FOR THE PLAGUE AND THE SOLUTION FOR AN HEIR TO THE JAGUAR CLAN. I NEED IT, PLEASE ... !!!

How odd, I left this comment yesterday but it doesn't seem to still be here. Two of a Kind is the 2nd story in a trilogy. Keep reading--Hypnotic is the next story--and you'll find most of the answers you seek! Thanks for reading and enjoying my work. :)

more of them please.......