All Comments on 'Two Parties Become One'

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Friskee_cplFriskee_cplalmost 17 years agoAuthor
It's Arse Not Ass

Dear American Readers.

I recently received an email berating me for usng the word arse instead of ass. I am an Australian and we say arse. I will never succumb to pressure to spell words the way you do. I couldn't care less if you say ass, which to me is a donkey, I will spell colour with a 'u' and drive on the left hand side of the road until I die.

Many thanks however to those US readers that like the Australian slang and language. Cheers.

tinman69stinman69salmost 17 years ago
Damned hot story!!!

If only I could get in on a deal like this before I am too old to do it anymore!!! I would love a woman who was just hot enough not to care where she got a hard one....as long as she got one!!

You write a great story!! Please keep up the good work.

Also love the Aussie touch !!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Spelling

And it's "peek" not "peak".

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Great Stuff!

As a Canadian I couldn't agree more with your comments to American critics. At least they can't drive to your country! Great story. Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
two parties become one

hot hot hot ladies are hot

CarnaleyeCarnaleyeabout 15 years ago
Greatttt Work

Oh God! What a story! You sure know how to write erotica. you are truly one of the best on literotica. Just keep them cummmmming for us.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
love it

Incredible stories. I love the way they are written and I can't wait to read them all. Keep them cumming

screedbearscreedbearover 3 years ago
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And who is your “God”?

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