All Comments on 'Two Peoples Midlife Chris's Meet'

I dont usually comment but mif life crisis di NOT start in your early 30's WTH. Obviously you have no idea what you are writing about when it comes to mid life crisis

Difficult to read in places, but I get the gist. Very natural. The tone is very calm and unrushed, as if the narrator knows what is going to happen and just goes with the flow. A midlife crisis mention seems inaccurate; these pleasant men are not struggling with their emotions or any angst in the least. All that stands between them and an enjoyable sexual romp is the intrusion and proximity of other people. These two fellows are way too polite and accommodating. They drink a bit too much for a pair who really just need some time together for some manly fun!

Quaint but enjoyable. Keep writing!

Sweet story, languid pacing, outdoors always a highly-spiced event.

'Alan leaned over and touched my arousal with his finger'

I have heard that this is apt to start things...

Splendid

What a great story. No "hot hunks", dripping dicks, or wicked studs. Just two guys finding themselves in a life situation and resolving admirably.

Wish we could see more real life stories such as this.

Students have midlife crisis too.

Just terrible!

Can't Literotica exercise some discretion in what it publishes? This is written at a grade-two level.

I see the troll is following my work, maybe they can share their work with us all.

Why can't literotica just take away the anonymous button, it only serves to feed the trolls over inflated sense of worth.

Not everyone is a Literary Genius, so what if it's not grammatically correct. I doubt very few readers on here would know. Be constructive, if you don't like something then leave and take your bitterness with you!!!

Nearly forgot, really enjoyed your tale bud. Dinae let the trolls get to you!!