All Comments on 'Two Ships'

Whew, makes me want to plan a trip to Vegas with stops in between. Well done my love!

Cindy xxxx

With rare exception, I thoroughly enjoy your tales (chapter 2 of Delia’s Dilemma was a bit overload/rough around the edges), and this tale was no exception - fun, nicely paced, great/vivid sex, interesting characters. Looks like you see this tale as a “one off” (?), but following Vicky to Las Vegas and/or a return visit with Emma would be fun for your readers. Aside: so Emma prefers the real thing (?); that surprised me - hard to believe the sex could be much better 😊

I FOR ONE HOPES SHE GETS "LOST" GOING HOME.

Good, quick paced sexy romp!

After she’d been travelling for so long and Emma riding a horse and working all day, the girls may have wanted to start off with a sexy shower, but getting straight into the dirty, sweaty impromptu sex was just right.

Hope a second chapter is in the making so they can get together for a homeward bound interlude. Perhaps Vicky can pick up a couple of unusual sex toys in Vegas to try out!!

"Two Ships!", It's Brilliant,,, Yes!

Hallo Bree!

Two passing ships in the night?... No, I don't believe it... your characters Vicky and Emma, are so Hot and Sexy, and the story is so beautifully written, I just can't see Vicky driving out of Emma's life!... Now if it were me instead of Vicky, the minute I seen Emma sneaking a look at my tits, all thoughts of Vegas would have been gone!

Thank-You, 5-Stars and 5-Hot Wet Orgasms... well done Love,,, Yes!

Queen Jackie and Gay Kat..