by dlane_1982
Great start liked how you did two perspectives, but where's the next chapters.
Great beginning; you need to finish the story or at least add another chapter!!!!
Did anonymous not realize the title of the story explains the similarities. Its from their diffrent perspectives.
I like it, but don't end them at the same location. overlap them like bricks....
You told the same story and only changed the names. What's up with that?6