All Comments on 'Two Southern Gentlemen Ch. 06'

I love your story idea but I can’t keep waiting for something, anything to happen. You have drawn it out including youngins, blood and piss. I couldn’t wait anymore and I went ahead and finished the story in my mind. Again I loved the concept but you just stretched it way to thin, in my opinion.(opinions are like assholes, everyone has one).

No worries! I know it's taking a long time to get going, but I'm still hoping the pay-off will be worth it. The two have such a long history and come from such different backgrounds that I wanted to make sure their development was believable, which unfortunately means spending more time on their backgrounds. But future readers will be able to skim over the first part if they want, so hopefully it will be less of a future once it's all out. Thanks for the feedback!