All Comments on 'Two Weeks'

Love the two characters you created — perfect big sister, the dialogue, humor and the sex — “Is it a difficult concept?" No, not the delightfully fun, wonderfully erotic way you pulled it off. Given your interesting Lit name, have you thought about writing a sci-fi/fantasy piece or even erotic horror? Just curious as you have a way with words.

Very nice. I'm looking forward to the following chapters.

I loved this story, one of the best I have read in ages - haunting, a huge turn on for me and beautiful too. Lots of thoughts and images roiling around in my head now. Hoping for more.

All over her face. Too bad we didn't get to see that. Still worthy of five stars.

Well done. Love Jessica's efforts to resist, then gives in, and then Riley realizes her sister is multi-orgasmic. Please continue this passionate and lustful story. I mean, the "two weeks" have just started. Haha

I loved everything about this story! It was original and unusual and refreshing and believable. Well written, well done!

You have a gift, I can’t wait to see where you take this. 5 Stars

I really want the next chapter, congrats!

That was outstanding. Sexy and sweet. Thanks so much for the effort. I had a great time reading it. I loved both characters.

Wow that was a hell of a read . I all but felt the sensations myself. The way this author uses words is akin to the way Mozart paints imagery on piano keys ! Thank you Mysty that was a hell of a little ride . This is the first of your stories I’ve read , however that’s about to change and if your other stories are half as good as this one I’ll be wholly amazed . Five stars and a standing ovation !