All Comments on 'Two Weeks of Leave'

HOT! sequel? but 30 pounds of muscle, c',on

Don't want to argue, but I've seen it happen in real life. /s/ 20 yr Army vet.

Possibly my new favorite story on this site! Hopefully we'll be seeing more of your work soon!

There's a lot more to tell yet in this story, he needs to nail Ashley and his step-mother yet, they both want some of his cock. He needs to wear out his little sister, then work on his older sister. Before his leave, I hope he fucks everyone except the family cat. It would be great if he left them all pregnant, especially his sisters and step-mother. If it's a fantasy, then make outrageous. Thanks.....Rich

Cann't wait for the next installment, keep up the great work.. loved the roommates and am looking forward to Laura and Jay getting together.

That's all I have to say

Thats all I can say, Awesome.

Semper-fuckin-Fi

BUT THIS TIME I THINK IT WOULD BE! Tell us more, please.

ya im in the military right now and all i can say is wow... i hope that happens to me when i come back from deployment with all my girl friends...

needs a good editor point in case he is sitting talking to his sister and suddenly it switches to her point of view then back and you don't say where the step mom came from this is a good first draft but should never have been posted without going through a good editor first

you seemed to think that you had to put anal in it. If that's required, I'll skip to a story that can make it with straight sex.

I loved the whole story, especially the anal. To those that do not like the anal, fuck off it is their story and there are plenty of stories that do not have anal.

I don't go for anal, but I still think this is a great story - now for the sequel, when he nails everybody but his dad. Or maybe???