All Comments on 'Two Weres, a Vamp & a Woman'

WOW!!!...MORE PLEASE!

Great story and awesome characters. the flow was good but you need to proof read a bit more. grammar was Ok there where some words that did not need to be there, and if she met his brother with him and with her room mate wouldn't she put two and two together. again was a great story thank you for sharing.

Hello, you don't know me, but I love this. Please, please, tell me you aren't going to leave this story! You've got so much going on! I can see a series of this. I do hope you continue. It's well written, with enough details to keep interest but not so many to bore you. You've given them unique personalities, not like every other barbie story out there, please, do continue.

Best Wishes and minor begging,

BC

Oh god I hope this story gets continued!! Love it so far and hope it doesn't end up like do many others not completed...