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UncleShepUncleShepabout 3 years ago

Excellent start. Please continue!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Part 2

You have started a great series. This is a great building series to a couple of college students who bring family members together. Who can enjoy many years together.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Great

great start to the story, you have to follow it up with part two

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Don’t stop, keep writing!

hornydad4uhornydad4uabout 3 years ago
More

Please go on with this story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Great story needs a Part 2 +

I see Beth's mom/dad cuming together with Joel & his mom

a Wedding of course, babies.

Great story. Thank you for writing and please continue it..

starbanestarbaneabout 3 years ago
Fantastic

Please continue. This was a great beginning!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Good Story

I hope part 2 to this story is in the works & keep up the good work.

NYBossNYBossabout 3 years agoAuthor
Chapter 2

There will be a second chapter. Will take about a month, maybe a little sooner. Thanks for your interest. NYBoss

DunkirkDunkirkabout 3 years ago

Can't wait to hear from Beth

krakbaknsak58krakbaknsak58about 3 years ago

Part 2 should not be a consideration, it should be a reality.

justwagsjustwagsabout 3 years ago

I often fantasized with my former wife that she took the role as my mommy. When I became a naughty boy that she wanted to fuck. Thank you as you have expanded my fantasy.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

I like pussies to be hairy, they are prettier for sure. But a flaming orange cunt, that is about as pitiful as it gets! I didn't rate this one because even though it was a hairy pussy story, you cant afford very many 1 rating's

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Good Intro / great lead-in, "His mom stretched and reached for the sky enabling her son to see her underarms with a few small tufts of brown hair. He immediately thought whether his mom did not shave her pussy, too." this could have been a lot better story (3 rating) had it been more devoted to the hairy pussy category, and pubic hair described more appropriately.

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I enjoy writing for you. I take my time, trying to develop the story so you will enjoy reading them as much as I enjoy writing them. I appreciate your feedback and suggestions for future stories. I will try to write more stories and post with greater frequency, but n...