All Comments on 'Two Worlds Ch. 01'

I hate to break it to you, but the folks who can afford metal detectors and time to go looking for treasure aren't that poor...

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Your writing is pretty rough and this is not really written as a proper story. It's kind of like you mixed a script and a story, doing neither one of them quite right. Do a little research, both into the academic resources and reading what others have wrote, not for enjoyment but for enlightenment.