by epexia
A very imaginative story with a superb plot and topped off with very well crafted writing. I have read commercially published works that weren't a patch on this.
I liked how you combined demonstrating Sara's intelligence with more exposition. Sara's smart, the house knows that, and rewards her with an education that serves to teach the reader more about the world. Clever.
Your first story was really well writing and very exciting to read but this is a masterclass in the unexpected and erotic tension.