All Comments on 'Tybalt and Juliet Ch. 10'

Jake and Amy are doing well together, despite all the trauma they have endured. Love that they are coming close to making love, and that they are comfortable in exploring each others' bodies. Jake's hairy-dusted chest is a very romantic sight -- and one she loves to taste and touch. Keep writing, please!

Nice addition to the series with Jake's back story and his talk with Richie. But there is one spelling you need to correct both here and in some earlier chapter: When making a comparison between two things, the word you want is versus not verses. Both are spelled correctly, but not exactly what you intended. Two bee ore knot too Bea, eh? Carry on, mate!

O I honestly was hoping that this was it and they finally had sex, please tell me chapter 11 is the one 😭

Just a note thanking the author (some days late) for this installment (including the talk between Jake and Billy)... -- and I see that the latest installment arrived fairly quickly with the actual (at least according to the teaser description) First Time.

E./:"nycreader".