All Comments on 'Uber'

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lefriclefricabout 7 years ago
needs more

As the start of a story, good concept. As a standalone.... TOO SHORT. Needs to be more than a tease!

coolgirl1coolgirl1about 7 years agoAuthor

Lol, that's the whole point

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
uber requires 4 door cars,

Other than the wrong kind of car, great story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Great story

Maybe a follow up where they actually hook up.

For wrong car comment: newer chargers are 4 door cars

oldermale1948oldermale1948about 7 years ago
Wrong Category

A teaser yes but Not one for MATURE section

coolgirl1coolgirl1about 7 years agoAuthor
Damn sorry

The fact is, you read the story, so what if it's in the wrong category? Maybe i thought my story was mature.

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