All Comments on 'UCLA to Big D Ch. 03'

Very creative and fun to read, not to mention all three of them sound totally hot! I really liked the strawberry 🍓 pussy treats!

Looking forward to where you take Jenna and Ryan, hopefully to Ryan's slow but eventful torment

Terrific chapter, but lots of sex and very little story can get a little tediousness. That said , it's nice to read a longer story, one that builds the characture and allows the reader some insite into the thoughts, fears and needs of your players.

Thanks for sharing

Felt the Paulo storey fell apart. Jenna was reluctant to get involved with Paulo but slips into a lesbian gangbang at the drop of a hat. Paulo had the goods to blackmail Jenna but walked away from the prize without a fight? I can only imagine Jenna's internal conflict as Paulo's cock took her places she hadn't dreamed of, instead the lesbian's tag team her with anal sex. I fell you let Jenna down in this chapter and tried to get the girls to do it all ....... just sayin