by taken13
Great premise that you could do a lot more with. Build up the tension and let us know what she is thinking.
great start to the story cant wait for next part build tension up and end with puplic gang bang say in a bar
I have fantasies about working in an office where for a variety of reasons I'm used. This story is great - tell us more!
We gave this a perfect score but the story was too short. we hope this is the beginnibg of a very long series. If not this is just a teases. My gf wants more and longer,
She loves stories of extreme forced puplic exhibition and humiliating sex. Can you deliver?
Good start to what could be a great seies but too short to build on. Love the concept. Flesh it out more. I know you can do better, You have an evil mind. make me give you a five.
Should be only the intro too a longer story or series.
Great start now expand on it.
My gf would love it of it was longer and nastier.