All Comments on 'Um, Both, I Guess Ch. 12'

Loved every bit of it and I can only hope you will keep word and go on! Thank you for what you have written and shared so far! 5*

You gave a great deal of detail about your exploratory activities in your earlier chapters, but when you got to the final step, all you had to say was "We fucked. Cunt and anal fucking. Repeatedly."

Why not more detail? How did they take that ultimate step? What led up to it? What did he (better yet, they) feel as they approached it? As they took it? In the immediate aftermath?

I feel like you've broken a promise---a promise that you made in the first 10 chapters but were too lazy to implement. Three stars.

Incomplete , unaccomplished. As a record of your developing sexuality it is good but as a complete story of that life it is sadly lacking.

The "weekend of sin" was a dissapointment to say the least. No detail about the sex that you so carefully led us up to believing would occur. That rather ruined the whole story.