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by CoolMcPseudonym

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lAnatomistelAnatomisteabout 1 month ago

Very well done, especially for a first try! 5-stars

IMHO, magic - heck any skill! - carries a cost. Perhaps your next story could explore that?

CoolMcPseudonymCoolMcPseudonymabout 1 month agoAuthor

@lAnatomiste Thanks for the feedback! I'm fleshing out further parts. If I don't explore her enchantment more in this dungeon story, I have an idea for a one chapter prequel that will explain it.

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