All Comments on '(Un)Natural'

Very nice vork and hot. I would to see were things goes for these three.

Exquisitely told and incredibly hot. Perfect

Loved it

Plllz can we have some more ??? (I sound like Oliver Twist: please sir, can I have some more ?)

Yeah!! Hot Damn! I do need some moooooore!! *shiver shiver*

This was awesome and soooo sexy .... aaaaawwwwmigod !!!

I would also love to read another

Please do another chapter. I would like to know how they make it as a polyamous couple.

This was awesome. Even though it was short it didn't feel rushed, like short works can. I like Bryan and Erik's dynamic and their attraction and interaction with each other didn't seem forced except for the purposeful hands off thing Bryan was trying to maintain. Well done.

What a hot fantasy. Brother and boyfriend together in a threesome.

so sweet and heartwarming! really emotionally indepth & great character development for such short story!

I'm a bi girl but damn this story....yumm

What a beautiful story. Twins have such an inherently strong connection with each other, it isn't surprising they would do the same in sex. The addition of Lucas just facilitates the arousal and adds a different dimension.

i usually read incest stories just for the 'gross!' thrill factor, but twincest actually does seem natural to me, go figure. but you write characters so well that i'm pretty sure you could make anything seem really hot! great story - i thought the flashback worked beautifully, and the twins' reunion made my heart ache :)

please keep this story going. i wanna hear more ;)

keep it cumming

ive cryed ive cringed ive cum.....fuck it blows my mind.....10 outta 10......more please...keep this story going.....jonathan...lancashire....uk

Awh, darn. This is only a oneshot. Man, I think this will make a great series.

You're a really great writer

I love it. It's slow, romantic and erotic at the same time!!! but sometime your style of writing make me lost!!!

I really liked this story, you wrote it without rushing it and you made it really sweet and romantic. This is very good.

What a beautiful story, and very well written as well.

it was so wonderfully written, i love how gentle and attentive Lucas was. Even more how shy and innocent Byran is. This was just fantastic , i look foward to reading more or your work.

realy well writen! The plot was fantastic. good job! (i realy did love it- this is one of my favorites now ahah)

That was a nice story. I liked how it built up. I think you had a few grammer/typos, but not bad enough for me to stop reading nor for me to remember where they were. Good job and keep up the good work. Loved the characters of the story.

that was the best story i ever read,ever! i mean it too.wow...i want

I cummed just reading it

Loved It!!! Being in Love is not wrong or unnatural! Most Shrinks need to be shot!!! So says a very Weird straight 21 year old girl!! Not joking, even though I joke about it a lot! Keep Writing!!!

This is one of the most beautiful stories I have ever read! I'm still teary-eyed .... I never wanted it to end, for not just my own selfish reasons, maybe you should think about expanding it. Turning it into a full length novel. I'd love how to hear how the twins grew up together, the brutal seperation, then reuniting.

Thank you so much for sharing this story! I enjoyed it immensly!

i see nothing wrong with what they did

Starting to get sort of comfortable with the incest thing (other people doing it not me) Enjoyed the storylne and the build up to the final act. Find menage a trois a complete turn on. Well written thanks

I absoulutly loved this story.I loved the way it was actually a story about something not just the sexual aspects of it. It had a great build up to the sex scene and i really felt the love great job!

This is probably my favorite story right here! Very well written with sensuality and also deals with the heart too. Character's actually have thought put into them and that makes me like them even more. I defiantly want to read more!

You lead the reader through the story instead of just giving the setting and the sex. I like stories like that. Captures the heart and keeps her there. Write more about this little trio? Please!

where did the butt plug go?

Sensual, gentle, hot and amazing. It's a beautiful story!

This is one story that I beleave will stay in the hearts and minds of your readers through the end of time. The story was written with a steady unhurried pace. Hot enought to be erotic and not perverted. And from the very beginning you could feel the love in the story.

That my fellow writers is the mixture for a beautifuly written story.

KISSES,

Dark_Angel1 ;)

P.S. Sorry for the bad spelling:D Thank God for the editors on this site! LOL!

just what i needed to perk me up tonight. thanx!

A well-paced, HOT story. More, please.

Ok....I'm a girl, and well, I guess you could say that the thought, and visions of men together are a turn on for me...But this story? It's more than that. When I read it, I could feel the love that was there between the 3 characters. It was amazing!

ohhh... such an incredble story and so hot!

more, please

That was amazing.

Normally the whole gay male thing does nothing for me, but this one was very arousing.

I love how you put a background and his reluctance. It spiced up the story alot..

Looking forward to more!

I really loved your story, thank you.

I think you should write an chapter to this story. I'd really love to read about the brothers having sex after so long being apart. The emotionally re-discovery of each other would be very exciting :)

cheers,

Marie

ive also been waiting for sbd to do the theme between brothers. if its jst purely the brothers, it will def be hotter. so kinky until its good. :D

I'd read your other stories before, but having an incredibly short memory, I'd forgotten your name.

I'd been waiting for a while now someone to do a decent romantic take on a brother-brother theme. Looks like I got my wish. Thanks.

Very delicious senario and well written! I loved the relationship between the brothers and Lucas as the King Cock. I'll have to read more of your stories. Thanks!