All Comments on 'Unbelievable'

Exellent story, hope you continue with it. keep writing.

WELL WRITTEN AND HOT...SAYS IT ALL

Many Feathers:

You've done a whale of a job on telling a hot erotic story and doing it well. Thank You. Ronnie W.

Great story.. I loved it..I hope to see more

What an agreeable straight man fantasy, being thrown in with two pairs of bisexual females in open relationships--yeah right. LOL. Nevertheless, this was a hot and well-written story. Best, Ken

Yes, it is completely "Unbelievable" but very well written and enjoyable!

Great and funny story, well written, as always.

I like your stories and your style

Looking for more

too many degrees. can't cum. too hot. can only dream.

Very, very well done! Thank you!

I know some of your readers find this story "well written," but it's one of the worst written and badly edited stories I've read here for a long time. There are words that you simply make up (languishly) and others that don't mean what you seem to think they do. The sentence structure throughout is so bad it's not even funny—just pathetic.

I seriously hope you'll find someone who'll go over your work before you submit it.

especially when the women get tired of him and just want to be together themselves.....basically a bunch of fuck slut whores never to be trusted....his best bet is to get out and go find a decent woman ....and leave this bunch of sluts in the gutter where they belong.....

I'm curious to know where this story goes next I'm very invested

I also am wondering where the story goes next.

Veterans wet dream.