All Comments on 'Unbelievable Pt. 04'

This is one of the best story lines I've ever read. The emotional turmoil is so detailed it's scary. Deep, enthralling, mesmerising, captive. Just a few words to describe the story. Hot, steamy, invigorating and extremely erotic. Just a few words to describe the sex. Can't wait for the next chapter. Please don't have us wait to long

Don't know where this story is headed but I love it hope it gets a happy ending

I love your stories i wish it was longer but I'm happy with this I can't wait until the next installment

The only thing I have a bit of a problem with is that Annie wasn't his first beside that it is one of my favorite stories johnny is a tortured soul and he is just trying to make it through keep this going I love it

Been looking forward to more of this series. Can't wait for more to keep coming.

I love this story and all its twists and turns, keep it going. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Another amazing chapter in this series, I'm glad you are developing the story slowly. I thought Ms. Ginsburg might be his first as it seemed as if they had a bit of a connection in the last part. I can't wait to see what Brandon has in mind, I'm looking forward to the next part.

Just wish Annie had been his first and hoping we don't have to wait 6 months for chapter 5

one really warped family...

I can't wait for the next chapter but I would like to see them a little bit longer

Had to wait for a while for the new chapter,can't say that it wasn't worth the wait cause this series is mind-blowing but still it'd be really nice if we don't have to wait this long for new chapters.

Outstanding story. Your writing keeps me on the edge. Thank you.

great story so far please write more

I hope you continue this story. It's great, and intriguing. You've captured the mind and ensnared soul. Happy, sad, mad, joyful, insane and sorrowful. Would love 3 flashbacks. 1 before Johnny's first breakdown as a point of reference to how ALL the family was before it, maybe as a dream from the mom. 2 how the family started being an incestuous one, maybe Annie's flashback. I think from what I read she was the first. 3 Johnny's nightmare, more detailed and maybe include a nice long dialogue between Johnny and Julie where she hints at her suicide as a way to not only stop her torture but also, maybe even more so as the only way to save him. I think that one would work best as a hypnotic regression in the new doctor's office. It's your story, these are just suggestions I hope you consider. 5* and favorited. Thanks for the entertainment.

A fantastic story so far, got tears in my eyes from time to time and it's keeping me on the edge . So keep them coming please.

Killer series so far hope you continue with it.

PLEASE continue with it and soon PLEASE

There is very very little love for Johnny, but a whole lot of lust from a bunch of size queens, the only one's showing some love towards him is Annie, Janus and in some degree Bill, each with their own selfish reasons, i think that Janus might be the one that really has true feelings for him, given that she isn't related to him in any way, yet still is drawn to him.

I think they are doing far more damage to his psyche than they realise, with pushing him into more and more sex, against his will, since he has no clue why or what they want it from him.

Still, this is a well written series so far, looking forward to read what happens to the poor Johnny.

So Johnny's family was super worried about where he was so all the women decided to have a daisy chain while they waited?

Portrayal of psychiatric disorder mostly correct. Except for the sister, the only thing the other females want is sex. No female seems to really care about John/Johnny than Janus. Although I am throughly interested in incestuous love stories; there seems to be no love for jon/johnny except from his dead dog, his dead friend from the institution, and Janus. John/Johnny is truely an unlucky individual. With the preceeding said, this series is still rated 5 stars.

The father is a real piece of garbage, going off half cocked and pretending to care about his family over his dick

I don't come close tears often but this chapter almost had me bawling. I spent almost a year locked up due to temper in a place similar to the one in the story. The one in the story 100 times worse then where I was but close enough to pull memory's and touch me and understand after over 40 yrs after that place. Won't stop till your story is done.

It's a pretty decent story thus far but I do have a few things that I dont like to much 1 the sister claims she is in love with him and always has been but yet she gets involved in a orgy and gangbang situations with her family without even a seconds thought to johnny sorry that just doesn't sound like she's that much in love with him too me and 2 the mother claims she was so worried about him but yet she was quick too get involved in a lesbian orgy with the other women in the family without a seconds thought to her son to me it just doesn't seem that she was really that worried about him those things is just not realistic on how a woman in love with a man would act or how a mother worried about her son would act that's just my opinion I would like to see you make a little more realistic on certain situations I think if you were to that going forward it would make this series a lot better again this is my opinion I understand this is your story I'm just trying to help you improve with some feedback remember just cause it's a fiction story and a fantasy doesn't mean it's has to be unrealistic

I agree with the last person to comment the sister claims to be in love with him but she doesn't hesitate to get in to a orgy and gangbang with her family and not even think on what johnny would think and the mom claimed to be worried about him yet she got involved in a lesbian orgy without giving him a seconds thought someone want to explain how that is being in love with him on the sisters part and how that's being so worried about him on the moms part all it seems to me is like there using him cause he has big dick none of them really care about him not even his parents otherwise they would have listened to him when he told him what was going on they don't care if he was to go to duke on his own they would more than likely be happy to be away from him

What a disgusting family. You really made me hate them. It means you are writing very nicely. I hope they pay severely for what they are doing to Johnny.