All Comments on 'Unbridled Lust Ch. 01'

Absolutely awesome story; an excellent entry into the world of erotic writing - WELCOME! I actually know a gorgeous asian girl with wavy auburn hair and I couldn't help but put her in the story in my mind... very erotic. I hope we get more stories from you - thank you and KEEP WRITING! :-)

Want to know what beach she hangs out at...would gladly rub suntan oil all over her hot body!

*Loved it* and keep up the good work sweety, I look forward to reading more of your stories. (((((Shadow_Dreamer)))))

So just what's her ethnic background, anyway? For some reason, I'm guessing she's asian, but that's just a hunch.