All Comments on 'Unbroken Ch. 02'

Loving the story ... Luis is a capitol PRICK ! ! ! For godsake make him grow up and learn that the sun does not rise and fall with his arse.

Loving Aidan but need to watch the names as Luis became Nicholas a few times and Aidan became Adrian...

Reall looking forward to seeing how this develops.

first of all i wana thank u for this mwaaaaa-ch 02 of the story

i dont fucking care about the names,all i kno is that the story is good at every pace

"U.B"may even exceed F.Y and S.F.L in success

i lyk the way Prince's dad reacted after the priest comforted them,their support towards gay i already contributing to the love i have for U.B

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA,how the prince planned and ended up getting haha.What he deserved.He was the one left btn the interim

gwe,Aiden is fierce!!!,i lyk the crazy Nature of these guys,,yes keep it coming my king

the story is justing starting but its lyk its in the mid!!!

Vanalas,for sure i hate prince for making Aiden lose his job..I hope he pays dearly,hah'ahaha Aiden is ahard nut to cruck!!!!!

i hope the family is not evil..God

school keeps me away thats i delay to comment,,,since i take my time reading my sweet as vanalas- story

i love u so.Just know it baby..Just ur perfect stories make my days and nights

the theme song is"this wat u came for"-rihanna

i wonder if they cud fall in love??the guys are crazy...for the prince.huhuhu he is still getting it,Aiden is better than Ramon And Adrian for sure

Nick,marcos,prince.L,Henry,i've failed to get the best although Nick is........Haha

post soon vanalas.I love u

good night

I struggled to read this story while there's a creative thread to the plot the narrative is so irritating and childish. Please, please use a proof reader; there are JUST too many mistakes! !

stupid anon..Dont show us ur stupidity

advise or just shut up

I am really enjoying this story so far and can't wait for more....having read read (and re read) your previous ones I already know that you will make me fall in love with the main characters as I did with george\ Henry...marco\ramon and aidrian\nick.....Keep up the wonderful writing and I will happily continue to get lost in their world....

Josranvictor ... I angree most of the time harsh comments need to be curbed and if you are going to comment then make it a critique of how to improve not just pulling the author and writing down.

However this time I do tend to agree a little ...

Vanalas and the stories would benefit greatly by the use of an editor. They would read the text first / they would correct grammatical errors / they would remove duplications not required and they could see areas for the story to develop and advise Valalas ...

This is what I try to do, I just wish someone could do it before the story is published. I have a story for a different site, but will not publish until an editor has gone through it and advised me. So I am not picking, even Harry Potter had to be edited before publishing!!!

i agree kelvin but,some tend to be harsh which makes our vanalas weak,..Atleast we shud understand him

I extremely love this chapter, I kept picturing a humiliated prince. But why do I have this feeling that the king would be the one to break his promise and meddle in Nicholas life.

can't wait for the next chapter.

haha,u guys are saying nick instead of luis...Guess nick was crazy to all of us..Hahaha this's more than mwaaa

guys come to think of it..Will Aidan oneday cooperate with the prince???

But how??Every time fights..And now,hoho the prince is fuming

what do u think????

vanalas plz

vanalas u can hurt...Its okay hurt us lyk want

u kno we want it but....

is vanalas okay guys???

He is not posting for long!!! i hope He is fine and perfect

vanalas are u okay???

Talk to us

we miss u vanalas

Looking everyday and missing you Vanalas ... Hope all is well ...

kelvin for sure am worried

i love u vanalas

I love your stories so much and how committed you are to delivering them regularly. So right now I for one am worried with the silence

vanalas talk to us or i'll die..I MEAN IT

Oh my vanalas

come back my nicholas...I love u so much and ur silence kills me baby

van

fine,may be u dont like me commenting everytime...I'l not do it agai'n but plz talk to us

ur silence gets us worried,why dont u understand this??

i love u

We may be in totally different countries and from different backgrounds, but since you usually post regularly ... silence is very worrying. Please post if only an update so we know you are well.

for sure kelvin van makes us worried

but do u know wat fucking hurts??

He neither respond nor post

He doesnt care about us afterall we're just readers to him,its ok

But also kno that these readers have hearts vanalas,it's not all about entertainment.But we care for u also

why the fuck cant u save 1sec and tell us u're okay??Huh???

I hate that

2 weeks no seeing van

Your story is based on wrong judgements. There are as many spelling and grammer errors as wrong judgements. It is not worth reading.