All Comments on 'Unbroken Ch. 13'

Such a stunning chapter ... I loved every second of it, but then you had to ruin it by bringing William back!!!

Loving the story and the plot ... I also want Jacob to be mine... I want a baby!!!

Thinking about Jacob the song is easy this time. It could be a choice of two by the same singer ...'You made me Love you...' or as Jacob is a year old by now it could even by 'Climb upon my kneee sonny boy' both by Al Jolson.

its not fair at all.,how could that condition consist semens??? that only means william will have to sleep with luis and i can see he is changed...That sucks becoz william brought all this misery,I HATE HIM and i dont wana be hurt anymore..God that guy can make me hate luis forever if at all they...vanalas dont dare do that to us ...so fucking annoying

God when will the truth be out..I hate seeing my couple suffer..Enough of william's drama.Shit

in this comment am rude but am sorry my king...But none of u knows how i hate william.Huh

OH i imagined the baby here with me..oh he is beautiful.acopy of luis,God too bad luis didnt see Aid during and after pregnancy...That made me sad,oh the sexual appetite,he couldnt get any d...k,i laughed when he could go to neither justin nor Ethan for sex..Hahahaha funny but sad

oh granny and Ethan have been the helpers with justin as the main pillar.God this chapter made me wana get pregnant and feel vanalas's child in me.Haha well..Uhmmn i want that

Aidan is strong and i lyk that..yes now its time to get back what is ours..Firstly by kicking william's stinking ass and disposing him to the world..ITS TIME FOR MAKING LUIS AFOOL,yeah he has to confess

So luis is back,the arrogant character???Hehehe,for him i want the truth out and make him know he's afool.God the guy made mad to an extent where i didnt lyk hearing from him ..He's selfish and non trustworthy

now its time to make him kneel..Hehe and when he'l see jacob.........I cant wait for the most sweet cake from my writer/king himself,mwaaaaah king himself i love u vanalas

i love u so much

I have been mad at your delay but after the 2 chapters I want more n I need it soon. I have come around a few writers and you are one of them. Respect your work and looking forward to reading more with no delays pretty please

to me the theme song is.....God i can select asong

due to baby jacob we can also give it umbrella by Rihanna

van post soon baby..Mwaaah

HOLLA

Where's chapter 14 Ave been refreshing this page till am tired need it come onB

Hey there fans and readers. how are y'all doing? The chapters are posted already, about two days age actually. just wait for a bit.

By the way, I am creating a Facebook page to keep me closer to you guys.

the name will be LITEROTICA VANALAS THE REAL ME. I will keep you updated about things there. Like the page

I am really loving this story. Great concept and very interesting story line. It keeps the reader engaged.