All Comments on 'Unbroken Ch. 17'

let us all go to the finish line! a very good fantasy story...it still heartwarming that even without the sex part, the story remains worth reading and yes - moving everyone...please author, release the ending...and fast at that! thank you for a very good read. honestly, the waiting for the next chapter is more agonizing than reading it.

Uuuuuuh that is it,...Wyatt is finally...DEAD,LADIES AND GENTLE MEN,WYATT IS DEAD!!!!,Can i believe it???God as i was reading this chapter,its lyk i was inside watching..Actually i thought wyatt was gona use luis as ashield but....He was killed in just AFLASH

he is afucking coward.hahahhehehehehehehehe.God i love this,the way he has died is how i wanted,that throat being pierced,yummy yummy

that william,hahahaha that damn bitch tried to seduce our luis but guess.He has to die fucking dogs.Hahahahaha

Did u see how luis saved Aidan when he had lost his conciousness???Hehehe,u guys ar kidding this cant end,i WANT MORE

i lyked the argument btn william and Aidan..William is aprofessor when it comes to being ugly??,hahahaha i wanted to be in it so that i can see that whore's face with those dead warlocks

yum nom,every part of the story was MARVELOUS AND LUXURIANT..did u see how Aidan appeared in the king??That elegant walking style.Haha

how that fucking man was killed,who was toturing the lady

hahaha,did u see wyatt's face when he was told that Aid has mang's power??Hehehe that fucking slut

OK,even then about wyatt destroy my happiness but when i remember how his coward arm was shot but alightening which he made him self..I feel satsified

Actually Aid and luis part made me so on top of the world.That smile from luis..That bed scene,haha was my second favourite part after wyatt's and william's death

oh our luis' apologies,God Aidan is hard,i wanted to tell him to forgive my luis..But i also wanted to see him yearning.Hehe.Yummy

luis knowing about jacob..Was so emotional infact pages 9-11 were romantic..our Luis,i wana see him getting back our Aidan..Plz let it be romantic atleast more 2chapters

The next chapter,i know it will be fire,so am really waiting

vanalas i dont even know the words i can use to please u and show u that i appreciate every bit and work u give us.but just know...No one will ever remove the title u have THE KING OF WRITERS and as avanaholic...i wana send u asong,breathless-shayne ward,bad thing its for straights

oh the theme song is Tatoo-jordin sparks

becos Aid,seems to say that but i want it to change,haha

luis seems to sorry by justin bieber

plz vanalas post soon,i love u,do u????

This chapter is too wow,God my fellow vanaholics,what do u say????

Stunning ... nothing more to say ... it was simply stunning!

I bought six books on Amazon yesterday with the vouchers I got for my birthday and none will be a compelling as this story has been!!!!

Thank you xxx

happy birthday kelvin..for sure no birthday gift is better than than this..Good for u,am even jealousy

this time,am not gona say anything about billboard,becos am confused..Every story is perfect so i end up making the new one the leader even though the previous one is quality too..God i know even U.B is gona lead now but quality is still coming..I dont know why vanalas make me do this

every story is mwaaaaaaaaah

I actually cried when Aidan disappeared. Can't wait for the next chapter. great job!

Between this bottle of wine and you I remain with u

As this story seems to be coming to an end has any one any ideas what you would like Vanalas to create for us next????

Pirate? Cruise Ship Romance? Tarzan of the jungle? Come on people lets come up with ideas it may help for him in developing the next story line.

Mind you it would be great to see the story move on to seeing their son become the king and having the same powers as Aidan and saving the kingdom just like his father had.