All Comments on 'Unc and the Girl Next Door'

Oh my God, get a proofreader.

I'm gonna have to say I didn't particularly enjoy this. The whole Black thing had absolutely nothing to do with the story and seemed pointless beyond, perhaps, pandering. Obstacles form the basis of interesting romances but the one in this story, their relative ages, was brushed over. The number of typos kept distracting me and made it confusing in places. Not your best effort.

Good story!

5

Heck, I liked it. Charming little story.

Nice story. Can’t wait for the next chapter.