by Mark2
I read all three and really loved it and am frustrated with the way that you ended. Keep it up! I look forward to the next one and I don't think that you need any suggestions.
loved the bio photo....one damn fine looking van....you are one fast mover...but the women love it
Keep it up. (Bad pun. I know) I know you have a lot on your plate, but when will we see some more chapters? I am enjoying this story a lot.
Traveller
Wow!! Is all I can say. As someone who has thought of their uncle that way, you do an amazing job of making my fantasies cum to "life" in your stories. I can't wait for more!!
Had a bit of trouble following what was on @ one point, but I came B4 I finished the first page! Well-written pornography, indeed. I salute you (You know what WITH, 2 Mark) ;) LOL Keep writing. Your stuff is 'off the hook'. I look 4ward 2 more of your submissions, Man. Good stuff.
Fair game that the two girls would give him the same pushiment of a spanking. Love it when Pru jack him off and made him cum